For your first progress assignment I do enjoy the subject you chose to focus on. New life is always an exciting thing to document and you did a great job capturing her from many angles.
I suggest to try and remove any distracting backgrounds to focus on her more. Her wearing black is a good contrast to the color, however between the foliage and building textures, the background is very busy.
The lighting for images 6 and 11 is harsh, so try decreasing the ISO in bright settings. The others are done pretty well.
I find image 11 unnecessary in the series of images, it takes away from the pregnancy aspect and leaves the audience looking at the water and background.
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ReplyDeleteFor your first progress assignment I do enjoy the subject you chose to focus on. New life is always an exciting thing to document and you did a great job capturing her from many angles.
I suggest to try and remove any distracting backgrounds to focus on her more. Her wearing black is a good contrast to the color, however between the foliage and building textures, the background is very busy.
The lighting for images 6 and 11 is harsh, so try decreasing the ISO in bright settings. The others are done pretty well.
I find image 11 unnecessary in the series of images, it takes away from the pregnancy aspect and leaves the audience looking at the water and background.
Keep going, I'm looking forward to seeing more!