Hi Cierra, I really like your idea to capture your friends pregnancy journey!
The first thing I notice is that you have a lot of similar poses, specifically image 2, 3 and 4 are essentially the same pose in a different outfit/ slightly different angle. For your final set you should probably only include one of them. (my personal favorite is 3 because the angle shows everything necessary without adding anything extra and the rings are highlighted the best.
The white background and the white outfit in the first three images are really effective because the background is clear and not distracting.
I think the black dress pictures have distracting backgrounds, if you were able to center her on the white wall in picture 6 that would be best. The backgrounds take away from your subject.
I believe images 8-10 are a stark contrast from the prior ones and a bit unflattering. I think images 8 and 10 could be a bit crisper, and the hair tie in image 9 is a bit distracting. The neutral background works well, but the low sitting angle could be improved upon.
Overall your concept is really good and I cannot wait to see your final product!
Hi Cierra, I really like your idea to capture your friends pregnancy journey!
ReplyDeleteThe first thing I notice is that you have a lot of similar poses, specifically image 2, 3 and 4 are essentially the same pose in a different outfit/ slightly different angle. For your final set you should probably only include one of them. (my personal favorite is 3 because the angle shows everything necessary without adding anything extra and the rings are highlighted the best.
The white background and the white outfit in the first three images are really effective because the background is clear and not distracting.
I think the black dress pictures have distracting backgrounds, if you were able to center her on the white wall in picture 6 that would be best. The backgrounds take away from your subject.
I believe images 8-10 are a stark contrast from the prior ones and a bit unflattering. I think images 8 and 10 could be a bit crisper, and the hair tie in image 9 is a bit distracting. The neutral background works well, but the low sitting angle could be improved upon.
Overall your concept is really good and I cannot wait to see your final product!